In mr Jones writing we have been writing about Sam Dickson and we are learning to write a biography about an Olympic athlete life. and this is mine.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Monday, August 9, 2021
Sam Dickson
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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hi Lukus
ReplyDeletei like how you have added lots of facts and all about Sam Dickson.
from Toi
Morena Lukus, thank you for sharing your work. Wasn't it great for Sam Dickson to come into school. What facts did he tell you about himself that you didn't know? I look forward to seeing more of your posts.
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